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The Nature Lake
Contributed by
lilthug
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Friday, 17th April 2015 @ 12:42:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Boats zooming
line flying
worms drowning
fish biting
crystal clear water
clear as a window
in the cabin in the woods
step in the water
cool water cool
look down at your feet
fish swimming around
all colors
red, orange, yellow, green, blue, indigo, violet
the colors of the rainbow
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2015-04-17 12:42:02]
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Re: The Nature Lake
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th April 2015 @ 10:42:20 AM AEST
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Very nice. Nice images but then I thought the acid started kicking in with those last two lines. 
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Re: The Nature Lake
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th April 2015 @ 02:20:16 AM AEST
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like the clear water, but the boats zooming
sounds like a bathtub otherwise they'd be polluting the waters.
Of course I can imagine the days of old when there were few. Then, this makes more sense and takes one back a few.
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Re: The Nature Lake
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 21st April 2015 @ 12:12:58 AM AEST
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welcome to ypdc, this is so pretty,
hugs n' love nessa |
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