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Judgement Call
Contributed by
softerware
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Thursday, 16th April 2015 @ 09:06:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Sorting through the ashes of my unworthy past;
Discarding that which need no longer be, at last;
Do it not; or do it fast!
Spread these wet and clumsy wings;
"Fly or die!" and pray it brings;
Less deadly stings.
To be as you were not to be;
To see what once could never see;
The mirror is no longer thee.
Friends suspect, reject, conspire!
Sustain, remain, their fond desire;
Too late the water to the fire!
Trash this shell; Lest you return;
Behold the cripple spins and turns;
and lingers not to watch it burn;
May childish hope embrace and blind you;
Still the dying past behind you.
Let no blackened ash remind you!
Taste the sky, spit the rind!
Bitter taste left best undined!
An empty plate your joys to find!
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softerware
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Re: Judgement Call
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by RussellReinhardt on
Friday, 17th April 2015 @ 04:01:05 AM AEST
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Hi there Soft
Now this is a stunning piece. Yes indeed we will know. But I fear it will be to late. This piece here of yours encapsulates much of the book of Revelations. Great write I love it. God bless
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Rus |
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Re: Judgement Call
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by xHeathenx on
Friday, 17th April 2015 @ 04:52:35 PM AEST
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Meaningful, deep, this carries the soothe for a burned-out mind.
It holds in itself a passionate null for the unrest of guilt to be lulled to sleep.
A message of forthcoming self-brought change.
One that's lovely, kind, without pride, but not one-bit remorseful or regretful.
Truly a great write Jaye. :) |
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Re: Judgement Call
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 21st April 2015 @ 07:55:01 AM AEST
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a post for all kinds of transitions, methinks. A well paced exhortation, metaphors aplenty, but all accessible and aptly accorded their place in a poem that, serendipitously, sums up my current predicament. Kismet.
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Re: Judgement Call
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by CandyAnn on
Monday, 27th April 2015 @ 08:02:42 AM AEST
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This os so far bu far my favorite poem I have read today on here... this poem is very deep and I'm sure some people could relate to this....
keep up the awesome writing!! :) |
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