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Uncertainty
Contributed by
jecox91
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Wednesday, 15th April 2015 @ 08:50:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I hate uncertainty.
Why?
Because with uncertainty comes lies, deceitful eyes, an unwanted guise.
And with that, trust dies.
I hate uncertainty.
Why?
Because there is no happy ending. At least not for me.
I hate uncertainty.
Why?
Because there is only one thing certain.
I will come out torn, scorned and worn.
Because I hate love. Love is uncertain. Love is pain.
I believed love will mend the pain. But how can that be when with love, the pain remains?
Maybe it isn't love that will mend the pain, but that pain will gain if love remains.
Maybe love creates pain, to make someone feel insane, unable to restrain.
And if that is true, then love is an evil that effects two. And those two are doomed to walk in affliction.
Maybe why I choose to be in affliction is because it is my addiction. Perhaps I love love and the painful condition.
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Re: Uncertainty
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th April 2015 @ 11:43:03 AM AEST
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Actually it should be then love is an evil that affects two.
Nice writing, though, so don't get me wrong because I like it. I like the rhymes within the sentences. Something I like to do too.
I don't think you're the only one who loves love and the painful condition as many of us can surely relate.
Thank you for sharing and  to YPDC.
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Re: Uncertainty
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by RussellReinhardt on
Wednesday, 15th April 2015 @ 12:32:48 PM AEST
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Hi there
Welcome to YPDC. Nice first post. I agree with tim. Keep writing. God bless
Greetings
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