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My Favorite Place
Contributed by
softerware
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Monday, 13th April 2015 @ 10:47:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I walk in, sit down, and she lights the single candle in the darkness.
She knows what I want. I am her favorite and she is mine.
Her skin glows in the flickering flame and I watch her as she prepares to delight me.
It’s always the same. Her offering is sweet, sublimated, borne upon the cool layers of white linen, in the shadow of a dim corner.
Warm and slightly saline.. soft as cream.
A feast for the hungry soul of me.
Cool to the touch at first, warming to tangy, and I savor every subtle nuance, every fragrance, unpeeling the secret petals,
like a flower opening,
layer by layer, deeper into the core, until at last, the salty brine of a satisfying finale.
I reach over for my glass..she fills it.
I leave money on the linens for her..and drink deeply of her warm saki.
I am satiated for now, but the hunger always returns.
She knows my weakness. I am addicted to her sushi.
Copyright ©
softerware
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Re: My Favorite Place
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th April 2015 @ 10:59:06 PM AEST
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Wow, very nice.
I'll have some cashew chicken, please.
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Re: My Favorite Place
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by RussellReinhardt on
Tuesday, 14th April 2015 @ 03:05:46 AM AEST
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Dear Soft
Let me just say this is a beautiful poem and nothing more because depending on ones mood this poem could be seen in an array of lights LoL for now I'll picture the sushi bar. Great write. God bless.
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: My Favorite Place
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by cathartic on
Tuesday, 14th April 2015 @ 05:29:27 AM AEST
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| haha clever, great write! |
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Re: My Favorite Place
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by deusdeira on
Thursday, 23rd April 2015 @ 04:05:02 AM AEST
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You think sushi addiction is a joke?!?! *mock outrage*
:p very funny poem |
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Re: My Favorite Place
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 23rd April 2015 @ 06:23:15 AM AEST
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Mikee likee. Nicely crafted...good skill here.
Invierno |
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Re: My Favorite Place
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by speedy on
Saturday, 2nd May 2015 @ 11:21:48 AM AEST
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My favourite place is home on the farm, surrounded by animals & nature. It's calming for me.
I'm glad you have your favourite place.
Great write.
Hannah B |
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Re: My Favorite Place
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by Durango on
Tuesday, 8th May 2018 @ 05:48:17 AM AEST
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I never thought sushi to be so erotic!
How clever the double meaning of your naughty--I mean nice poem is.
This poem is rated R for romantic. |
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