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Farewell Lover
Contributed by
codeofcohen
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Monday, 13th April 2015 @ 05:49:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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You look like a 'T'
As you hang from that tree
Limp and unmoving
Its all you should be
You stare at the ground still
You breathe in no air
I confess to arousal
As I kicked the chair
As I watch you swing
As dead as the wood
You are pale
You are cold
And you feel really good
I cut through your gut
With my hands in your hair
And all of this while
You continue to stare
I know its not right
I know its not normal
But drinking your blood
Is the right kind of formal
I'm dressed in a suit
Your dressed to impress
The pale of your skin
Gives you deathly finesse
Free to me now
Free to use
Rotting and putrid
But still in those shoes
Nothing but mess now
Then nothing at all
Goodbye my lover
And Goodbye to all
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codeofcohen
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Re: Farewell Lover
(User Rating: 1 )
by shadowdancer on
Wednesday, 15th April 2015 @ 12:32:12 AM AEST
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Creepy good,well written.That Ted well what a maniac lol. (I spend time watching True Crime and pondering too.
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Re: Farewell Lover
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by xHeathenx on
Wednesday, 15th April 2015 @ 05:21:06 AM AEST
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Very interesting, almost like a creepy child's nursery rhyme or sing-song with a sinister take.
One two... Teddy's Coming for you...
Hehe. Nicely done. :) |
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Re: Farewell Lover
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by SuicidalSon on
Tuesday, 5th May 2015 @ 09:01:08 PM AEST
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| Well written I enjoyed this immensely. I definitely got a good laugh in. Thanks for sharing. |
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