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Take it From Me
Contributed by
Beyfoxman5
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Monday, 13th April 2015 @ 01:37:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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You are on your way up once more
And you just passed me on your right
I'm a cross on a tree, not on a door
Remember me, before you say goodnight
You pass on by without a thought
And all I feel is a slight little breeze
But what I'll tell you is heavy
Heavier than you'll believe
Set are your finances
You are living life to the fullest
Can this all end, what are your chances?
100 percent, you bet
6 car garage
And a house on the lake
And in your spare time you stack paper
Listen I'm a cross, look, I'm not fake
Take it from me
Once the object of everyone's envy
And in 5 seconds, my family
The object of everyone's pity
Take it from me
This is not the only life you'll live
So what are you living for really?
Don't just remember these words ,
Believe
Copyright ©
Beyfoxman5
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Re: Take it From Me
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by mniw on
Tuesday, 14th April 2015 @ 10:19:32 PM AEST
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Re: Take it From Me
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by xHeathenx on
Wednesday, 15th April 2015 @ 05:18:47 AM AEST
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| Oh wow. It took me a moment to realize what this is and where it was going, and it certainly puts meaning behind statistic. Impressive write Bey. :) |
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Re: Take it From Me
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 16th April 2015 @ 04:14:27 PM AEST
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if i'm driving down the road and a cross starts talking to
me i'm pulling over lol, excellent perspective write,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Take it From Me
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by speedy on
Friday, 1st May 2015 @ 08:51:59 PM AEST
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Great write.
Hannah B
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