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Color Me Beautiful
Contributed by
blossomwriter
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Friday, 10th April 2015 @ 10:52:14 PM in AEST
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See me crystal clear.
I am a rainbow.
Every season of my soul shines through.
How I have become more real to life, then life itself.
Once the silhouette,
of the sun when it takes shape,
formly derived, hidden in the background.
How when it shines, it's face is more transparent to the reasons of life's growth.
Though I am not only a ray of light,
a ray of love, but both-
see what you see with the spectrum or not,
I am a butterfly of synergy,
and fully transformable.
Color me beautiful.
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Re: Color Me Beautiful
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 10th April 2015 @ 11:02:07 PM AEST
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such gentle flowing lines, true exquisite beauty and such
a joy to read:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Color Me Beautiful
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by RussellReinhardt on
Saturday, 11th April 2015 @ 03:43:02 AM AEST
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Hi there
Yes I agree with Nessa a breath of fresh air. Great write. God bless. TFS
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: Color Me Beautiful
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 11th April 2015 @ 07:34:23 AM AEST
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This is really a special poem. The message is wonderful. The content and and structure speak to practice.
Your use of rhyme between two stanzas is a favourite little thing of mine.
"How when it shines, it's face is more transparent to the reasons of life's growth.
Though I am not only a ray of light,
a ray of love, but both-"
Very well done. Maturity of writing well defined here.
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Re: Color Me Beautiful
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by codeofcohen on
Monday, 13th April 2015 @ 06:01:24 PM AEST
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| I love this, sets a strangely peaceful mood in me, particularly the last 6 lines, wonderful work. |
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