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by the pond
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Wednesday, 8th April 2015 @ 10:00:21 PM in AEST
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tonight i sit and listen to the crickets sing
my heart is grateful for things life brings
one lone voice speaks now in the wilderness
indeed silence breathes through the darkness,
only a slight breeze stirs- then a frogs voice
a cacophony of noise clamors into a chorus
rowdy fellows of the night as croaking soars
crickets join in song- night in glorious uproar!
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2015-04-08 22:00:21]
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Re: by the pond
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by xHeathenx on
Wednesday, 8th April 2015 @ 10:28:25 PM AEST
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| I love the end. A beautiful way to describe a moment in noisy tranquility. :) |
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Re: by the pond
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by irisblue on
Wednesday, 8th April 2015 @ 10:52:47 PM AEST
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nature's symphony written so beautifully.
huggs, k |
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Re: by the pond
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by RussellReinhardt on
Thursday, 9th April 2015 @ 01:07:42 AM AEST
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What a beautiful poem. I ones slept at a truck stop it rained so much a large shallow dam formed. Bull frogs appeared from all over they sang all night it was one of the most peaceful sleeps I've ever had. TFS. God bless
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Re: by the pond
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by emystar on
Thursday, 9th April 2015 @ 01:48:12 AM AEST
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A little piece of heaven on earth.
huggs, luv,
emy
A little peice of heaven on Earth |
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Re: by the pond
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by shelby on
Thursday, 9th April 2015 @ 11:00:53 AM AEST
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You brought me to sit near the pond with you.What a beautiful poem.Love ya Nessa
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: by the pond
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th April 2015 @ 11:34:40 AM AEST
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And nearby, the Creature of the Black Lagoon readies his attack!!!   [s17.photobucket.com]
j/k Me likes. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: by the pond
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by blossomwriter on
Thursday, 9th April 2015 @ 09:58:51 PM AEST
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| The music of the night is much entertaining that way.. Love how you brought such an image to life! |
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Re: by the pond
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by softerware on
Sunday, 12th April 2015 @ 10:18:42 PM AEST
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You begin with silence, paint the scene, draw us into your moment, and like a skilled conductor, you orchestrate the chorus into uproarious pandemonium!
This is lovely, and very vivid. Techicolor words, with stereophonic sound!
Makes me want to stand up and clap!
"A moment of quiet reflection" indeed!"
More, please?
softerware
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Re: by the pond
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by deusdeira on
Thursday, 23rd April 2015 @ 04:01:46 AM AEST
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| Where I work there is a pond nearby. Sometimes when it rains really hard, all the frogs come out hop around the parking lot. Me and a friend always go around and gather all the frogs so that they don't get run over. :) Frogs have always been one of my favorite animals. I have always loved to sit and listen to nature. |
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Re: by the pond
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by hray42 on
Thursday, 23rd April 2015 @ 11:01:31 PM AEST
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| This poem sort of reminds me of one of my favorite songs.. The Sound Of Silence.. Only your silence is interrupted.. Those little buggers!! LOL.... Nice imagery... |
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Re: by the pond
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by desciple on
Thursday, 21st May 2015 @ 05:49:43 PM AEST
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great fluidity, painting a picture with your words setting the scene...really enjoyed it, great piece
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Re: by the pond
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Monday, 25th May 2015 @ 05:35:40 PM AEST
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Doesn't nature bring out the best?!
Fox |
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Re: by the pond
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 26th May 2015 @ 07:50:58 AM AEST
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Simply superb.
I hear these same noises nightly! |
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Re: by the pond
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 29th May 2015 @ 09:35:00 AM AEST
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Soothing and smile-inducing! I guess I missed this post, but what a nice treat to find.
~Scorp |
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Re: by the pond
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Saturday, 30th May 2015 @ 08:02:21 AM AEST
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Crickets cackled outside my hotel room last night. Funny how this is my first read of the day.
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Fox |
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Re: by the pond
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 13th June 2015 @ 10:21:40 AM AEST
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| Sp peaceful...a moment of tranquillity for me as I read it... Hugs and woofies,,, |
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Re: by the pond
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by ingeniusidiot on
Friday, 26th June 2015 @ 02:14:21 PM AEST
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Hi Nessa,
Makes me wish I was back home sitting around the lake with a fire burning and listening to everything around me. This was beautifully written as always.
Rich |
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Re: by the pond
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by Elisabeth on
Friday, 26th June 2015 @ 04:51:50 PM AEST
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When we are quiet and actively listening, we can hear the songs of the earth. Lovely write!
-Elisabeth |
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Re: by the pond
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by Archie on
Monday, 7th September 2015 @ 06:28:59 PM AEST
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| Nature poems Always stir my heart. Yours is a very good one. |
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Re: by the pond
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by Flex4life13 on
Monday, 2nd November 2015 @ 06:22:16 PM AEST
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Great depiction of just taking a moment in its full regard, how I fail to do so!
-Love Len. |
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Re: by the pond
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by Invierno on
Friday, 17th May 2019 @ 11:46:08 PM AEST
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Super cool poem!
Invierno |
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Re: by the pond
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 27th August 2020 @ 01:12:16 AM AEST
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| Love it.....perfect, just perfect.. |
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