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Ungrateful by m.n.i.w
Contributed by
mniw
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Wednesday, 8th April 2015 @ 12:06:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I got a fetish for neglecting things that I should cherish.
Once I realize its true value, those moments have already perished.
Who's at fault when our time becomes essence-less?
When we begin to question our coexistence.
How do we make each moment resemble something of elegance?
Time must be at our mercy because time is merciless.
Forgive my sins and all my sins that may become friends.
The time I have left only depends.
Many circumstances.
Moments left up to chances.
I surrender to pessimistic thoughts on multiple occasions.
Only make moves when motivation is provided by mental persuasion.
Or when exteriors give me a motive.
Sometimes I fail to see the reason for the worth of pursuance.
Coagulated thoughts then become a nuisance.
Time never waits, so I watch time with prudence.
So maybe my time can be continued, rather than in conclusion.
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mniw
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2015-04-08 12:06:10]
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Re: Ungrateful by m.n.i.w
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by emystar on
Thursday, 9th April 2015 @ 02:54:22 AM AEST
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Very impressive, deep,deep write.
Awesome.
Blessings,
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Re: Ungrateful by m.n.i.w
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 9th April 2015 @ 03:11:49 PM AEST
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Sometimes I read lines and I think, wow, wish I had written that.
"Time must be at our mercy because time is merciless." is one that leapt out at me here.
I enjoyed reading, felt as smooth as rich coffee
Great work
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