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Angel's Demise
Contributed by
lonelywolf04
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Wednesday, 8th April 2015 @ 01:09:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The star of this scene,
Is a beaten queen,
With a love unclean,
Living a life unseen,
With black and blue in disguise,
As shades of pink around the eyes,
The pain hidden behind the smiling lies,
Of an angel's demise.
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Re: Angel's Demise
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 8th April 2015 @ 01:38:27 AM AEST
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wow! images that jump off the page, this poem breathes!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Angel's Demise
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by RussellReinhardt on
Wednesday, 8th April 2015 @ 06:38:42 AM AEST
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Hi There
There is an entire autobiography in this poem. One must just read into it properly. Furthermore I would not call it dark poetry, move like life or anguish poetry. None the less however you categorize it, it's a very well constructed piece of work. TFS God bless
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Re: Angel's Demise
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by xHeathenx on
Wednesday, 8th April 2015 @ 06:53:30 AM AEST
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| I'll agree with Rus, however regardless of whether or not this in fact relative to your own personal story or life, it's a great way to describe such an overlooked occurrence in our day-to-day life. |
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Re: Angel's Demise
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by InfinitePoet on
Wednesday, 14th October 2015 @ 01:46:35 AM AEST
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Short
Solid
to the point!!
Great piece!!
Keep writing and posting
forever
peace
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