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If I meant something
Contributed by
Nate_dogg
on
Tuesday, 7th April 2015 @ 11:13:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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All of us live
All of us die
The only difference is
I'm just the dust in the corner of someone's eye
They wont care that I'm missing
They won't care that I'm gone
The only thing your gonna remember
Is the gun shot a dawn
Some people may weep
Others drown in sorrow
The only thing will be
Is that there's no me tomorrow
Now that I'm gone
And that I've left you all be
There will never be a moment
That was better if it had me
Copyright ©
Nate_dogg
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2015-04-07 11:13:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: If I meant something
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 7th April 2015 @ 11:19:00 AM AEST (User
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warm welcome to ypdc, your poem is so beautifully
moving, i look forward to more from you!
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: If I meant something
(User Rating: 1 ) by RussellReinhardt on
Tuesday, 7th April 2015 @ 11:43:28 AM AEST (User
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Hi there
Yes indeed welcome to YPDC. I agree Nessa here is a new poet I'd also love to read more. Great job. God bless
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: If I meant something
(User Rating: 1 ) by freckle on
Tuesday, 7th April 2015 @ 07:49:29 PM AEST (User
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Hey, i read your poem and I liked it. It also made me worry. See, back in January, I wanted to die. I wanted to die bad enough, that on February 3rd I began a three week stay in a mental hospital. So if you're thinking about dying - please - contact your local suicide hot line....they can help. I'm more than happy to talk as well. Just realize, after this point in time; I'd always miss you.
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Re: If I meant something
(User Rating: 1 ) by freckle on
Wednesday, 8th April 2015 @ 09:19:22 PM AEST (User
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Nate, Just checking in today to see if you posted any other poems...
My day would be better if I had a new poem of yours to read! :) |
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Re: If I meant something
(User Rating: 1 ) by irisblue on
Wednesday, 8th April 2015 @ 11:25:04 PM AEST (User
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very good poem. I bet you'd be surprised how much you would be missed. every life matters! you matter greatly to god, he loves you and you are important. keep writing , your poem is well done.
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