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Raindrops Show My Sorrow
Contributed by
waynster
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Sunday, 5th April 2015 @ 03:57:01 PM in AEST
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From the heavens, pours the rain
bringing to my surface, sorrow and dreaded emotion
The rain drops fall on my face
like an incredible magic potion
Falling from the dark skies
cooling enhanced before it touches my skin
Becoming drenched from head to toe
the rain brings me memory of all mortal sin
Feeling cold and bewildered
from feelings I still hold inside
The clouds cover the earth
there is nowhere I can now hide
Incredible feeling of guilt
knowing I have not cleansed my soul
Now I see streaks of lightening
and listen to loud thunder roll
It’s apparent I am frightened
from this sorrow and pain held within
Obviously the sunshine allows me to hide it
until it rains again
True to myself and others
is all I ever wanted to be
If only I could stand in the rain
and I had no sorrow and pain flowing within side of me
This would be a glorious day
I would dance in puddles, splashing water all around
I would embrace the sight of the lightening
and relish the great thundering sound
Written on 3 April 2015
Copyright © 2015 E. Wayne Searles All Rights Reserved
http://www.poeticquest-1.biglaunch.net
poeticquest@hotmail.com
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waynster
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Re: Raindrops Show My Sorrow
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by emystar on
Sunday, 5th April 2015 @ 07:57:43 PM AEST
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A bit sad but beautifully written.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Raindrops Show My Sorrow
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th April 2015 @ 10:11:35 PM AEST
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This is a moving poem if ever there was one.
Well done! I connect with the writer standing out in the cold rain. It's realness is captured by your words.
Thank you!
Peace! |
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Re: Raindrops Show My Sorrow
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by irisblue on
Sunday, 5th April 2015 @ 10:28:02 PM AEST
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I pray your pain goes away, so honest and moving. beautifully written as always.
irisblue |
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Re: Raindrops Show My Sorrow
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by xHeathenx on
Monday, 6th April 2015 @ 07:45:08 PM AEST
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| I once played in the rain, enjoyment of inclement weather. Now I'm not sad, just a bit irritated when caught in it. Haha. Good write Wayne. :) |
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Re: Raindrops Show My Sorrow
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by mniw on
Tuesday, 7th April 2015 @ 11:09:28 AM AEST
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| Imagery of rain always captures sorrow. |
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Re: Raindrops Show My Sorrow
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 7th April 2015 @ 09:17:56 PM AEST
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i love rain and rain poetry, i'll send you my sun, you send
all the rain my way, this is so beautifully heartfelt, i find it
very calming and peaceful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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