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Like a snowstorm upon a mountain top by m.n.i.w
Contributed by
mniw
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Sunday, 5th April 2015 @ 01:07:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It feels like a snowstorm upon a mountain top. You call out to no one, but your calls still echo until you're engulfed in your own bitterness. You grow numb and resent everything until your mind is blank. The sun doesn't shine. It just laughs at you, trolling your life. Fooling you into thinking that light will ever come your way again. The darkness becomes your light and your world become bittersweet and dim.
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Re: Like a snowstorm upon a mountain top by m.n.i.w
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th April 2015 @ 01:11:40 PM AEST
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Short and to the point. Definitely a great explanation of love & heartbreak!
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Re: Like a snowstorm upon a mountain top by m.n.i.w
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by Waynster on
Sunday, 5th April 2015 @ 04:11:45 PM AEST
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See, in this poem, you have a lot of awesome words and or lines! If you could find a certain style to write them in, where it would flow and be easier for a reader to follow, these words would shine like a diamond!
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Re: Like a snowstorm upon a mountain top by m.n.i.w
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by emystar on
Sunday, 5th April 2015 @ 08:12:48 PM AEST
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Great writing.
Blessings,
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