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the colonel
Contributed by
irisblue
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Saturday, 4th April 2015 @ 11:40:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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in the hospital room as I held your hand and prayed
I felt god's presence and hoped you and your leg would be saved.
since I was a little girl, for me you were always there
to love me and protect me, and show how much you care.
as a colonel in the airforce, you served your country true
as a father and a husband you loved your family too.
dad you are so patient, wise and strong
if only I heeded half your advice, my life would have not gone wrong.
you have never given up on me, always on my side
I'm here for you now and always, along for the bumpy ride.
I know the fights not over, but your in his loving arms
he will guide and protect you from any impending harm.
there are some more obstacles to overcome,
but with the love of god and your family the battles already won.
God please protect my dad, guard his soul and heart
cause deep down inside, part of me is falling apart.
dad I love you
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Re: the colonel
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th April 2015 @ 04:30:49 AM AEST
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A beautiful dedication!!!
I am sorry he, your family, and you must endure this. Still and always thinking of you.
Prayers and hugs.
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Re: the colonel
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by Waynster on
Sunday, 5th April 2015 @ 03:28:36 PM AEST
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Very sorry to hear about your dad. This Veteran salutes him! This poem you wrote is absolutely amazing. It touched my heart!
Thank you for sharing it! Keep on writing, I love reading your poetry.
Wayne |
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Re: the colonel
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 5th April 2015 @ 04:38:09 PM AEST
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this is such a beautifully penned loving tribute for your dad,
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: the colonel
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th April 2015 @ 12:40:59 AM AEST
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beautify
this is beautiful
this love. I'm sorry for what happened to
your dad!
It's a long way home, for all.
God bless you and your father!
Peace! |
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Re: the colonel
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by xHeathenx on
Monday, 6th April 2015 @ 03:30:49 AM AEST
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| Carry that torch of love, burning ever strongly, brightly, illuminating the world with your father's bright wisdom and legacy in the world, both of which, shine out from you. :) |
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Re: the colonel
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by RussellReinhardt on
Tuesday, 7th April 2015 @ 10:28:09 AM AEST
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I had to read this one a few time the tears fell so it was like a rain storm before my eyes. What a beautiful poem. I feel your pain and love for your dad I love and miss my dad just as much. Keep writing and God bless TFS
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: the colonel
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by karoody on
Saturday, 9th May 2015 @ 04:09:33 PM AEST
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This brought tears to my eyes. So beautiful and full of Love. Prayers for your family. May you all share strength and love.
Kara |
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Re: the colonel
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 28th July 2015 @ 01:20:27 PM AEST
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Beautiful. Wishing you love and strength.
~Scorp |
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