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springtime in a city

Contributed by essential on Tuesday, 31st March 2015 @ 04:56:52 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



The grey streets despise me
As I wander poutfully
Over the river's murky stream
Of countless dreams long-forgotten

And in it flow the ruthless lies we
Told each other too proud to see
That the the world of our dream
In reality is rotten

I see you everywhere since you went,
In every window in every street
And all the dreams that I forgot
Are lost and no one to remind me

What was it? I have to relent
On you, If ever we should meet
Again, if in a dream - or not
You will know how to find me




Copyright © essential ... [ 2015-03-31 16:56:52]
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Re: springtime in a city (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Wednesday, 1st April 2015 @ 09:45:23 AM AEST
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I like the quaintness and the first stanza.
Great job!
Reminds me of the 1930's in Paris!


Re: springtime in a city (User Rating: 1 )
by Beyfoxman5 on Wednesday, 1st April 2015 @ 06:50:11 PM AEST
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Great write, with great timing as well.

Best,

Fox


Re: springtime in a city (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Wednesday, 1st April 2015 @ 07:43:16 PM AEST
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Love this line, ' the grey streets despise me' I'm a city dweller in the mean streets of St. Louis. So you got my attention.


ming


Re: springtime in a city (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 2nd April 2015 @ 01:30:33 AM AEST
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Great work.
blessings,
emy


Re: springtime in a city (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Thursday, 2nd April 2015 @ 08:48:09 PM AEST
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I liked it....the great way you described things...took me there...I saw it, felt it.
Thanks!




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