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God Shed A Tear
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
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Sunday, 29th March 2015 @ 08:32:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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God shed a tear
Down on me
So self-absorbed was I
Full of need and greed
What's in it for me
Ignoring what I was given
In search of more
Looking for yet another
Big score
It was all about me
No one else you see
My heart full of desire
For what I should receive
Yes God shed a tear
Down on me
With the hope I shall see
The gift of life he has given me
Copyright ©
jamesstockdale
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2015-03-29 08:32:36]
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Re: God Shed A Tear
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by irisblue on
Sunday, 29th March 2015 @ 09:33:13 PM AEST
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| what a beautiful gift this poem is james. your vulnerability is endearing as is this write. |
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Re: God Shed A Tear
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 31st March 2015 @ 01:07:58 PM AEST
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truly beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: God Shed A Tear
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by RussellReinhardt on
Monday, 13th April 2015 @ 08:33:29 AM AEST
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Hi there
What a write bear truth and acquisition of wisdom finally. It's so wonderful when people come to realize that God is there and that God loves them. TFS. God bless
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: God Shed A Tear
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by Archie on
Thursday, 9th July 2015 @ 06:30:26 PM AEST
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| There is a simple and pure resolve in your poems that comforts and draws the reader in, almost like a hug. |
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Re: God Shed A Tear
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by poet17 on
Sunday, 16th August 2015 @ 02:03:51 PM AEST
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| So beautiful and encouraging. Thank you for sharing. Needed that right now. |
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