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And It Was You
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
on
Saturday, 28th March 2015 @ 12:33:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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With the hope
Of tomorrow
Fading away
I simply walked on
In search of a better way
A fresh start to a new day
Riddled with sorrow and pain
The likes I could not wish away
My hate and disdain
Were all that remained
I said goodbye
To the world I once knew
Washed it away
Replaced it with new
In my darkest hour
The sun shined through
God sent me a gift
And it was you.
Copyright ©
jamesstockdale
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2015-03-28 12:33:23]
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Re: And It Was You
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th March 2015 @ 07:40:11 PM AEST
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this is beautiful!
Peace! |
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Re: And It Was You
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by irisblue on
Saturday, 28th March 2015 @ 08:02:17 PM AEST
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| James , this is very sweet ! I love the last stanza! |
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Re: And It Was You
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 31st March 2015 @ 12:51:22 PM AEST
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truly sweetly beautifully penned,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: And It Was You
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by xHeathenx on
Wednesday, 1st April 2015 @ 11:33:39 AM AEST
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| The stanzas feel short and sweet, and I like the sentiment here. Makes me think it'd be a fine dedication to a child. :) |
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Re: And It Was You
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by alicewhite on
Friday, 3rd April 2015 @ 01:35:44 PM AEST
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| Beautiful indeed.Like the rainbow after the storm.x |
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