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loaded pistols
Contributed by
ming
on
Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 07:23:44 PM in AEST
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abstract
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paper
tell me
express
my meaning
I'm a signpost forest
waiting
to be
read
standing
waiting
a cathedral
of trees
or leaving
left unspoken
remain so
the expenditure
of words
cash me in
scream me out
whispers
my soul
never tell.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2015-03-27 19:23:44] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: loaded pistols
(User Rating: 1 ) by Beyfoxman5 on
Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 11:08:09 PM AEST (User
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Deep, thoughtful. I dig your words.
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Re: loaded pistols
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th March 2015 @ 07:50:34 PM AEST (User
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or leaving left unspoken
remain so
interesting query for the soul
I like this a lot!
I'll have to read more work from you ming.
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Re: loaded pistols
(User Rating: 1 ) by xHeathenx on
Sunday, 29th March 2015 @ 06:43:24 AM AEST (User
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Wow. The signpost forest is awesome. Waiting to be read, yet it would take so long to do so, that many would not care to try. Imagine reading a book or story in such a fashion. That would be quite fun. :)
A cathedral of trees. Something about that line is just awesome to me. A joyous and profound collection of individuals that are all unique, yet the same to some extent. Perhaps you are a forest of signposts, and the world is a cathedral, a giant collective of individual signposts all wanting to be read, yet not willing to look too far into each and every other forest. :) |
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