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Assuming the Position
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 02:28:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I'm done with nice
Done with respect
Anything I give you
I will never get
And so
I'm finished
Giving all for the sake of good
Considering all my kindness be raped if it could
I despise being treated like I'm typical
When everything I do is out of normal bounds
You could say it's straight eliptical
A round circumvention of running over
Taking out of my pockets while saying "bend over"
I will not be taken advantage of or for granted
When all this anger is now so deeply implanted
I refuse
To be anything but great
And so I respond to poor treatment
With an unquenchable hate
And so now you should know
Before I walk away and go
That you meant a lot to me
But now you're bitter misery
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xHeathenx
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2015-03-27 02:28:19]
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Re: Assuming the Position
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by RussellReinhardt on
Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 12:50:49 PM AEST
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Hi there
Wow so much emotion brutal truth. This is a process you going through it will pass. As for the poem it self well penned. God bless
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Rus |
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Re: Assuming the Position
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by Waynster on
Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 12:58:42 PM AEST
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This is an awesome, awesome poem! I too went through this and somehow still feel as if I am! Thank you for sharing this poem. Very well written, keep up the great work!
Wayne |
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Re: Assuming the Position
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 04:27:36 PM AEST
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beautifully expressed, honest and heartfelt, i just adore
that last stanza!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Assuming the Position
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by alicewhite on
Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 06:11:50 PM AEST
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| As a mere mortal as of yet only capable of good self poetry who just so happens by chanceo or if o am to believe the impossiible by magik has recently encountered this dilema you write of would like your honest opinion on my aim to achieve total understanding respect love and forgiveness .but I think that I am more at fault because I know that in order to feel offended I had pride and even if I knew better than to treat some one else as I had been treated I should have been happy to be a catalyst for others. I have had to learn the same way and some one else suffered so that I may feel regret as it played on my mind n feeling guilt that eventually increases empathy. I am still learning . He was also I feel a catalyst for me as is the other great poet on here' the one who talks of pale faces big arse n frogs.lol |
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Re: Assuming the Position
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 28th March 2015 @ 01:53:51 PM AEST
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That's the way too write a poem
No study here. It came straight from your soul.
It flowed fast and strong. 5* |
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