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Beauty of the Ocean
Contributed by
irisblue
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Thursday, 26th March 2015 @ 08:21:25 AM in AEST
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As I walk along the beach, I feel the rough wet sand collapse beneath my feet.
Warm and effervescent waves cascade around my ankles in a rhythmic dance
High above me a seagull's cries are carried away with the breeze
and a fiddler crab scurries off for the evening
The sun is slowly melting into the porcelain blanket of glass ,
Everywhere a glorious display of pink, orange and purple set fire to the sky ...
Silhouettes of a pair of dolphins enchanting finale displayed against God's curtain call's vibrant glow
I feel the sun's warmth on my face, and the heat and light in my eyes as I shut them
Now all I hear is the soft, hypnotic drone of waves, rush in, now back out, and then in again over my feet
The seagull cries have grown distant as the breeze carries him out to sea
I open my eyes to find the sun has melted away,and it is just me and the abyss
and it is times like this, moments such as these, that shows me God is amazing and beautiful
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Re: Beauty of the Ocean
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th March 2015 @ 10:10:08 AM AEST
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He also created crabs and look out, one is gonna bite your tootsies. ;-)
Seriously, though, such beauty and peace in this. You bring the reader there with you in this wonderfully painted poem.
Most excellent, my dear.
Thank you for this greatness. |
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Re: Beauty of the Ocean
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 04:02:59 PM AEST
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a beautifully image filled piece,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Beauty of the Ocean
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 9th April 2015 @ 03:18:25 PM AEST
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Wow, book me 2 weeks in that place!!
I want to experience that sunset every night.
Loved the vivid imagery you freed with your pen, I was totally absorbed in the scene.
Lovely write
Steve |
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Re: Beauty of the Ocean
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by RussellReinhardt on
Monday, 13th April 2015 @ 08:38:54 AM AEST
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Hi there
All I'm going to say is God is great. This is a WOW POEM. TFS. God bless
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: Beauty of the Ocean
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 24th August 2015 @ 11:35:48 AM AEST
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I knew just by the title that I would love this beautiful poem. Thank you for the zen-like peace your words painted for me. Wow! Such beauty. I do not live near an ocean, but I am fortunate enough to live wonderfully close to a lovely body of water that captures some exquisite sunsets. Water has such a soothing effect on the soul, and you did it great justice with this write.
Love this!
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Re: Beauty of the Ocean
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2015 @ 08:39:59 PM AEST
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| This....this is why I know your poems are awesome. The reader could just get lost in here and never want to leave! |
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Re: Beauty of the Ocean
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by wheels on
Tuesday, 14th June 2016 @ 09:37:48 PM AEST
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| simple and beautifully painted |
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