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Skin
Contributed by
FindingMyself
on
Tuesday, 24th March 2015 @ 09:42:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Our bodies on top of each other...
The soft touch of your skin slowly caressing on mine
We are going to another world...
A world made just for you and me
Nothin but smiles,kissing and loving sunshine coming our way.
When we come together we are one!
We have that connection that we are so passionately together that nobody can break us apart!
That sweet gazing into each others eyes, that amazing kiss of your lips followed by the soft touch of you hands makes me feel like a new woman.
From passionate to rough...
Making me go crazy, I can't get enough of you
Please don't stop...
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2015-03-24 21:42:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Skin
(User Rating: 1 ) by Waynster on
Wednesday, 25th March 2015 @ 02:12:15 PM AEST (User
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Hi again. Okay, i got it, you use awesome words in what you write. Your poetry does not have to rhyme, but should have flow. I am realizing that is what you're missing, the flow. I think that if you reread what you write, a couple times, and tried to grasp feeling from it, you will find the rhythm of your poem and it will flow.
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