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Fond memories not quite remembered
Contributed by
Beyfoxman5
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Sunday, 22nd March 2015 @ 04:08:35 PM in AEST
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I forget exactly how it went
Long story short, I saw it going different in my mind
We we did, not our intent
Can't believe we caught the train on time
Am I awake? Alive what happened?
Ok, generic answer-I don't know
Look, a once fluffy cake now flattened
I'd better grab my ID-It's time to go
For once, so glad I woke up alone
Keys and wallet-check
A quick glance- in which direction is home?
A tattoo on my forearm, what the heck?
Fond memories not quite remembered
Events in my mind, jumbled and tethered
Whether I was the hero, or the goat
Results are results, and I've taken note
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Re: Fond memories not quite remembered
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by softerware on
Sunday, 22nd March 2015 @ 09:39:28 PM AEST
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Much enjoyed!
Were you the ripple or the pond?
"Events in my mind, jumbled and tethered"..that's the way memories are!
I love your ending! Sometimes it's the best we can do!
"Results are results and I've taken note!"
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Re: Fond memories not quite remembered
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by irisblue on
Sunday, 22nd March 2015 @ 10:48:31 PM AEST
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| this is great. very funny poem. sounds like a wild time was had lolol. |
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Re: Fond memories not quite remembered
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th March 2015 @ 06:19:09 AM AEST
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How did a goat get in there? Ssssh...I won't tell anybody.
This gave me a chuckle and a smile.
Thank you,
Tim |
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Re: Fond memories not quite remembered
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 02:44:56 PM AEST
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it sounds like a good time! lol,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Fond memories not quite remembered
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by Pogivic on
Saturday, 4th April 2015 @ 01:37:54 PM AEST
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| A good poem and interesting thoughts from a mixture of interesting impressions. I like the ending as it reaffirms my understanding that life teaches us from the negative as well as the positive experiences we encounter. A little humor mixed in is always a positive. |
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