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glitters
Contributed by
irisblue
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Sunday, 22nd March 2015 @ 03:15:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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glitter of sparkling gold cascades to the ground.
electric currents rush through me.
neon yellow, deep pinks, aquamarine blues
electrify the sky, just as an exploding star.
the earth orange and fuzzy beneath my feet.
feeling the warm sensations as glitter dusts my face and blankets the ground.
I close my eyes and smile, serenity finally found.
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irisblue
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2015-03-22 15:15:46]
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Re: glitters
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 22nd March 2015 @ 03:25:05 PM AEST
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beautifully calming and peaceful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: glitters
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd March 2015 @ 09:29:39 PM AEST
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Beautiful on so many levels.
We are soooooooooooooooooooo fortunate to witness your talent!
Teim |
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Re: glitters
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by Waynster on
Monday, 23rd March 2015 @ 03:24:49 AM AEST
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If I look deep into your mind, I see your vision of a person being electrocuted by a high voltage and the sparks are flying and you explain it from their vision as they experience it. The serenity found is of course the death from the electrocution they have endured.
This is how I read this poem! Written very well!
Wayne |
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Re: glitters
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 23rd March 2015 @ 11:15:58 PM AEST
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hmm
good vibrations.... |
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