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No Escape
Contributed by
FireStarter
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Wednesday, 18th March 2015 @ 04:49:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Wandering through the valley of emptiness
Haunted by old demons and new
Trying to escape the loneliness
Can't stop thinking of you
Strolling over the path of a lost mind
My love for you is breaking me
Trying to find a way out, but I'm blind
I shall never be free
Walking on memory lane
Can't seem to go through
My life will never be the same
Without you
Crawling through the woods of vulnerability
No way out of this bitter landscape
Because the emptiness is inside me
There is no escape
Copyright ©
FireStarter
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2015-03-18 16:49:09]
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Re: No Escape
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by Waynster on
Wednesday, 18th March 2015 @ 05:02:16 PM AEST
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I really love this poem! This is awesome! Every word creates a description that flaunts excitement within the mind of the reader. You did an awesome job of grasping any readers attention! Great write, Keep it up!
Wayne |
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Re: No Escape
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 18th March 2015 @ 05:23:41 PM AEST
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beautifully penned, bittersweet the memory of one gone,
we must breathe and step one bit at a time,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: No Escape
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 24th March 2015 @ 01:21:36 AM AEST
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Loved everything about this flow,
well done. |
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Re: No Escape
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 24th March 2015 @ 02:39:36 AM AEST
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Awesome.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: No Escape
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by blknwht on
Friday, 14th August 2015 @ 06:29:05 PM AEST
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I can directly connect to this poem... i've read a few of yours and we aren't in the same boat.. but pretty close...
I'm hoping the pain goes away.... ill keep writing til that day...
thanks for sharing.. great write |
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