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Tried and Failed Versus What If
Contributed by
Beyfoxman5
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Tuesday, 17th March 2015 @ 07:08:51 PM in AEST
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Tried and failed, you dove in
What if, you have never been
Tried and failed, the bell rang, and you answered
What if, there is nothing about you that I am enamored
Tried and failed, you stuck your nose in it
What if, your cup, there's nothing in it
Tried and failed, your value is in your experience
What if, any way you slice it, you make no sense
Tried and failed, you will reach your dream
What if, you never came to the arena
Tried and failed, you are battled tested, and I approve
What If, I have no comment, you've never moved
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Re: Tried and Failed Versus What If
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th March 2015 @ 07:15:18 PM AEST
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Now that was really cool!!!
Thank you,
Tim |
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Re: Tried and Failed Versus What If
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by xHeathenx on
Wednesday, 18th March 2015 @ 02:16:31 AM AEST
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Fox this is terrific! Great all the way, short and sweet, and important all the same!
This definitely reminds me of a couple people in how they look at me, with me being the what if, but I see myself as the first, just only in the aspects of love, and interpersonal experiences. Some of the ones I'm drawn to fit in both categories, and still, I love them both all the same.
What an interesting coincidence to find this poem. My lady friend falls into the latter, while I(compared to her, fall in the first), somewhere inbetween. :) |
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Re: Tried and Failed Versus What If
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 18th March 2015 @ 03:21:58 PM AEST
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interesting presentation, ying/yang, ambitious/uninspired,
lived life/watched life style that makes your reader ponder
their own life, values, style, beliefs....
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Tried and Failed Versus What If
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by irisblue on
Saturday, 21st March 2015 @ 12:05:37 PM AEST
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| great poem. great contrasts. it's better to try and fail than never try at all , |
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