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Hummingbird
Contributed by
JamesStockdale
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Monday, 16th March 2015 @ 08:30:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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I'm no ordinary bird
Perched high up in the tree
Neither an insect, nor a bumble bee
You may not see me
Know what I am
Blind to all things around you
Including little ole me
I'm just a feathered half pint
Many vivid colors abound
With a rather long beak
However I'm none too meek
I flutter all about
With amazing speed
Come to your house simply to feed
I attend to all your flowers and trees
With breakneck speed
No, not a honey bee
Just little ole me
Copyright ©
JamesStockdale
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2015-03-16 08:30:50]
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Re: Hummingbird
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th March 2015 @ 01:00:01 PM AEST
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I like it. I could see this while I read so....= great imagery.
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Re: Hummingbird
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by irisblue on
Monday, 16th March 2015 @ 06:49:24 PM AEST
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| I love birds and I love this poem. |
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Re: Hummingbird
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by xHeathenx on
Tuesday, 17th March 2015 @ 11:45:02 PM AEST
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I liked this. It has a nice flow to it, that for whatever reason makes me think of a skip, or bashful kick, like the one where one looks at the ground blushing, and kicks their foot.
I don't know why that makes sense to me at all based on the way I'm reading it, but it's cute. Haha.
On top of that, the hummingbird is a beast. A busybody with no time to waste. Wings and a heart that beat so fast, the eye cannot even register the sight. Much like the important things in life am I right? ;) |
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Re: Hummingbird
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 18th March 2015 @ 12:12:06 AM AEST
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A beautiful write about my favourite bird. There's one that visits my garden everyday and both my niece and I look forward to seeing it. We've tried very often to get a picture but was only successful once. Love your imagery....
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Re: Hummingbird
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 18th March 2015 @ 02:52:13 PM AEST
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absolutely beautifully sweet!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Hummingbird
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Monday, 30th March 2015 @ 08:52:10 AM AEST
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The great bird. Great write. Thank you for your comments as well.
Best,
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Re: Hummingbird
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th September 2020 @ 02:43:29 AM AEST
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| aw cute |
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