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...and how i want 2 Be

Contributed by RANE on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

So I'm a 'gwennnabe'~
yeah, but who isn't
I never had the 'perfect' life
but hey, I'm still living

And if I tell U now...
U'r all i ever needed
would U laugh at me
is it so hard 2 Believe it

U'r sO beautiful
I always liked the 'pretty' things
Unusual~the truth that disappointment brings

'Lying' here, thinking about how not 2 think about U;
~all the things I could do 2 really live without U
(But I'm in this confusion
seems such an illusion)

If I put on the makeup
will it cover up the 'break-up

OUCH!~ scarlet lips
Red and bleeding like my heart
the lips U kissed so tender,
U said we'd 'never part'

OUCH!~snowhite complexion
pale + sickly like U left me
the same face U use 2 Smile upon;
said U never would 4get me

OUCH
OUCH!~ Reaching eyes
outlined deeply like this sorrow
the eyes that when U looked in2
could always see 2morrow

If I wear this face 2night
Will it somehow Be alright
(If U never really knew me
would U still see right through me)

I want 2 show my face again
(U'r burried deep inside my skin)
(There~take that)
I want it back

but
what can I do
2 make it NOT about UUUU

It's not about U
It's about Me
........and how i want 2 Be........

(and how I want 2 Be........

with U)........

Copyright © RANE ... [ 2003-05-27 07:05:00]
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Re: ...and how i want 2 Be (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 02:50:29 AM AEST
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Different but then you are a new type of mind. liked it though it's completely you, new you,
or should I say
U nu U r 2 2 bluuuuuu

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