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Ground of Burning Coals
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Friday, 13th March 2015 @ 01:18:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Churning fires of passion
Rage ever onward
Carrying the imaginative visual stimulations
Of infinite dreams, ideas, and beautiful visions
I see a pale-skinned hairless angel
With pavement wings
Soaring towards the sky
While worldly chains seek to drag her down
She has a showing of anguish
A bit of pain in which she endures
The chains press into her skin
But she intends to break free of that man-made bind
She's already gone a mile
And has many more to go
When will she reach the heavens?
No one will ever know
But her resolve does not falter
She attempts her bleak-seemed goal
I see this feat with my naked eyes
And plan to do the same myself
To leave the dirt of melting tar
And ground of burning coals
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Re: Ground of Burning Coals
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 13th March 2015 @ 09:38:49 PM AEST
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I knew it.
Great poem and very tight and concise.
Can you spare that angel? |
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Re: Ground of Burning Coals
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th March 2015 @ 10:11:29 PM AEST
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Applauds inspiration! Was it while sitting upon the porcelain throne? I saw a demon in the floor tile recently while there. Didn't result in a poem though.
Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Tim |
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Re: Ground of Burning Coals
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by Pogivic on
Saturday, 14th March 2015 @ 04:33:15 PM AEST
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| Enjoyed reading this- I have often looked at patterns in the world around me and like you that gives me inspiration to write. I once wrote a short poem on a block of wood when I had no writing paper handy. |
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Re: Ground of Burning Coals
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 16th March 2015 @ 06:13:27 AM AEST
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creative, insightful and beautifully penned,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Ground of Burning Coals
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by Waynster on
Wednesday, 18th March 2015 @ 06:10:52 PM AEST
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It's funny, our wall paper in our bathroom has designs that you can make out figures in as well. However, I never wrote a poem about them either. Maybe I should, your's was pretty cool! Thanks for sharing.
Wayne |
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