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The Runaway Horse
Contributed by
Pogivic
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Wednesday, 11th March 2015 @ 09:34:05 PM in AEST
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The Runaway Horse
Some say that blonds are not too smart,
Of course that is not true,
For blonds can do most anything,
That anyone can do.
Just consider now this beauty,
Who felt the urge to ride,
A horse that stood with saddle on,
As she walked by it's side.
Although she had never rode a horse,
In her there was no fear.
She jumped onto the horses back.
The road ahead was clear.
With reins in hand the horse took off,
At such a wild pace,
It seemed to her that he must think,
He's running in a race.
Although she yelled slow down, slow down,
He never missed a stride,
Then gradually she felt herself,
Start slipping to one side.
She tried to grab onto his mane,
But could not keep her seat,
As slowly down she fell beneath,
The horses pounding feet.
With a foot caught in the stirrup,
She let out such a scream.
For it was now a nightmare ride,
That started out a dream.
A Walmart greeter sprang to life.
He ran to help of course,
And saved her from a terrible fate,
When he unplugged the horse.
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Pogivic
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Re: The Runaway Horse
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by irisblue on
Wednesday, 11th March 2015 @ 10:09:36 PM AEST
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| this poem is awesome it flows well and pulled me along for the ride. and the ending is soo funny I didn't see that coming. love it |
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Re: The Runaway Horse
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 11th March 2015 @ 11:09:37 PM AEST
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ha! this is great! beautiful first post, i look forward to your
next, warm welcome to ypdc:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Runaway Horse
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th March 2015 @ 11:22:33 PM AEST
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That's funny and didn't expect that at all. Thank you for posting and  to YPDC.
Tim |
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Re: The Runaway Horse
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by shanat on
Wednesday, 11th March 2015 @ 11:41:43 PM AEST
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Yeah I agree with the other comments, I didn't see the ending comming, what a ride! Flowed perfectly :)
Shanat :)
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Re: The Runaway Horse
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by Ambivalence on
Thursday, 12th March 2015 @ 04:43:10 PM AEST
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Great piece! Hope the horse is okay :P
-Ambivalence |
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Re: The Runaway Horse
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by xHeathenx on
Thursday, 12th March 2015 @ 05:31:48 PM AEST
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| A great poem with a remarkable joke in it's writing. I rather enjoyed it. Hope to see more, comedy or not. :) |
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Re: The Runaway Horse
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by Banjosandwitch on
Friday, 13th March 2015 @ 09:10:00 AM AEST
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| lol giggles |
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Re: The Runaway Horse
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 13th March 2015 @ 03:10:32 PM AEST
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Hahaha.. A poet after my own heart!! I was caught by the ending also...
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