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works in progress
Contributed by
lonelywolf04
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Wednesday, 11th March 2015 @ 06:09:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Set fire to your soul,
The heart torn asunder,
Will it become whole,
Or be left to wonder.
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Re: works in progress
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 11th March 2015 @ 10:04:15 AM AEST
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this is a beautiful start for a poem i believe you should
finish, it also stands on its own as a poem, or makes a
strong stanza, keep writing poet:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: works in progress
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by xHeathenx on
Wednesday, 11th March 2015 @ 12:23:41 PM AEST
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| Share your others individually, because this one as strong as it is, is quite moving, and almost seems like it'll be a tough tone and depth to follow. Either way, I definitely like this. :) |
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Re: works in progress
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by thehotshotpoet on
Thursday, 12th March 2015 @ 07:57:29 AM AEST
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| tis a good start would like to see more..thanks for sharing |
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