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The Field of Love.......
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Walking hand in hand,
Just you & I,
accross this beautiful land,
watching birds pass by,
walking to our special place,
where we can rest a while,
this field we can't erase,
a place where lovers smile,
Laying in the fields of love,
hearing the birds sing,
watching the clouds up above,
just you & I doing our thing,
The field of love is where we'll lay,
together you & I ,
when the wind blows the trees will sway,
paradise to our eyes,
Our field of love,will always be there,
If only in our dreams,
not a worry ,not a care,
just listening to the streams,
smelling the flowers blossom,
in the breeze that blows,
This field to us is awesom,
there our love shows,
freely expressing our desires,
behind the tall grass,
our hearts burning like fires,
a feeling we want to last,
The field of Love,where others may go,
To relax and enjoy the scene,
watching the beauty of all that grows,
a place where lovers dream.
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LOWMAN613
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2003-05-27 04:05:00]
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Re: The Field of Love.......
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 06:11:32 AM AEST
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| Truly beautiful.. you brought a paradise before our eyes..lovely poem.. venkat |
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Re: The Field of Love.......
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by Chuckx on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 06:53:18 AM AEST
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Christina,
I love your poem.
I love the way you walk
hand in hand
across the field
prepared to touch
your dream
I wander in and smell
your white dress
touching the grass
watching you lie
to dream
I wonder if my love
wandered here;
wouldn't she dream
in fields of love
like you? |
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Re: The Field of Love.......
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 08:10:00 AM AEST
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excellent poem Christina, I think I will take Al there,
Shari |
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Re: The Field of Love.......
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 09:41:19 AM AEST
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Christina this is beautiful. You bring a warm feeling and a beautiful image. This place you speak of here reminds me of the meadows at Canvas Creek in Idaho!! lovely................
Michelle |
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Re: The Field of Love.......
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 03:58:59 PM AEST
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Pretty! Me likey! :P Blessed be,
~ Moonlit |
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Re: The Field of Love.......
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 12:17:07 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written with such lovely images ... Jan |
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Re: The Field of Love.......
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 11:24:40 AM AEST
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| i agree with Shari... i taking my Rob there too... excellent write, Christina... simply wondrous... blessings... |
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