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One day
Contributed by
Jackee_line
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Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 06:26:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When I see you there
starring at me from you know where.
I wish that we could be
together always for eternity.
I long for your strong embrace
I want to kiss your handsom face.
The need is strong
It can't be wrong.
The way I feel, I can't deny
because this feeling will never die.
One day my love, we will be together
as two heart's becomes one forever.
Copyright ©
Jackee_line
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2002-08-06 06:26:50]
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Re: One day
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by markymark on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 06:34:21 AM AEST
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| sweet and sad and well written, enjoyed this...Mark... |
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Re: One day
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 06:43:29 AM AEST
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| This is lovely...it just needs some editing for sp. mistakes. ooops!! |
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Re: One day
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by Lovingangel4u on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 05:20:53 PM AEST
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Really like this its so sweet and well written. Hope your wish comes true.
Take Care,
Carmen
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Re: One day
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 02:48:15 PM AEST
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| Very romantic, ver lovely! |
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