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Breathing your love away
Contributed by
thepoet353897
on
Wednesday, 4th March 2015 @ 01:34:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Count to ten and close my eyes
Open up to see the skies
Cry a tear, two or three
Shut away the memories
Discard the thoughts of anguish and pain
All these pictures, all these frames
Burn the clothes, release a scream
Throw away this two way team
Traipse inside and shut the door
Try to cope a little more
Rock away the words you gave
And all the time I tried to save
Approach the bed, redo the sheets
Place carefully the things I keep
Fall asleep another day
Breathe another love away...
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2015-03-04 13:34:59]
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Re: Breathing your love away
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 4th March 2015 @ 01:52:03 PM AEST
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Fantastic! Perfect flow without sacrificing content.
Well done.
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Re: Breathing your love away
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by Lionel on
Wednesday, 4th March 2015 @ 06:53:39 PM AEST
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| Good poem; though very sad. |
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Re: Breathing your love away
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by thehotshotpoet on
Friday, 6th March 2015 @ 07:27:51 AM AEST
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| very nice read easy to fallow,,thanks for sharing |
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