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Remorse
Contributed by
Noonetwothree
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Wednesday, 4th March 2015 @ 03:35:15 AM in AEST
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anguished
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Stuck in this fatalistic eternity,
no strength will find my way,
too lost to be found.
Where is Mercy?
What life am I living that deigns such regret?
Remorse.
Were that I could turn back the clock.
To save myself.
To prevent this long trip and fall.
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Re: Remorse
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by thepoet353897 on
Wednesday, 4th March 2015 @ 03:48:21 AM AEST
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Powerful, I love the way this is worded
Good write!!!
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Re: Remorse
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 4th March 2015 @ 06:03:25 AM AEST
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A wishful fantasy for all our bad days.
'too lost to be found' - a great line. S |
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Re: Remorse
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 4th March 2015 @ 09:47:36 AM AEST
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So few words say the most!
5* |
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Re: Remorse
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 4th March 2015 @ 02:08:52 PM AEST
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Wonderful job. Very emotive and well written.
Hopefully the view will be that much more breathtaking when you reach the top once more. ;)
~Scorp |
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Re: Remorse
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by Lionel on
Wednesday, 4th March 2015 @ 07:02:32 PM AEST
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| Good poem. I too remember things, in my past, that I wish I could re-do. I suppose most people do too. |
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Re: Remorse
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th March 2015 @ 06:14:55 AM AEST
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| Good job, will ring the bell for many. Where would we be without regrets? We should embrace our regrets and wear them as a badge of experience. Regret and remorse are proof to ourselves that we care about our mistakes. |
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Re: Remorse
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by thehotshotpoet on
Friday, 6th March 2015 @ 07:32:26 AM AEST
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| well written,easily understood..thanks for sharing |
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