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Cars of Labor
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Tuesday, 3rd March 2015 @ 01:24:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Machines carry sound of steel oceans
Every voice eroded by seas of discordance
Half-day scheduling with repetitive tasks
Not-too exceptionally-heavy labor ordinance
Plastic windshields shielding our eyes
And styrofoam mufflers as well
For we are in the cars of industry
Driving to prevent an infertile spell
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xHeathenx
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2015-03-03 01:24:34] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Cars of Labor
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 4th March 2015 @ 10:53:27 AM AEST (User
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Nice.......
I work with machines myself and sometimes the noise is music to your ears. Often times not.
Good luck with your new job. |
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Re: Cars of Labor
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th March 2015 @ 11:27:02 AM AEST (User
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I'm gonna be honest here: if you hadn't told the reader what your mindset was, would he/she have ever had a clue? I have to doubt it. |
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