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Witchcraft
Contributed by
thepoet353897
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Sunday, 1st March 2015 @ 02:52:12 AM in AEST
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I'm standing
The winds of time swirl
Around my body
Soon to be a corpse
My cackle awakes me
And as I turn to face
Your hate
I'm grabbed
Put upon the stake
Tied with the human's weapon
And that's it...
And whilst the oak wood burns
I conjure my thoughts
Breathe in
And burn..............
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Re: Witchcraft
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st March 2015 @ 03:25:14 AM AEST
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the hair or the cackle along the midpoint of the back, as you suggest,
is the burn, the rub, the breath beneath the criticism.
And it's always unfair, good or do we dare, bad.
Witchcraft
The why, this mystery
I see this empty space beside all these healing
flowers flowing pumping blood right from the core of the Earth outwards...
You write lovely thepoet353897
very imaginative stuff, like "And whilst the oak wood burns' it's very natural
Peace!
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Re: Witchcraft
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by Kimmy79 on
Sunday, 1st March 2015 @ 06:55:21 AM AEST
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| Very deep I can feel the emotion in your writing with this poem. I enjoyed. |
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Re: Witchcraft
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st March 2015 @ 08:31:33 AM AEST
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| I have a recommendation. Sincerely read and comment on our other authors at this site. Don't just comment to get comments. You seem more about you you you. Please read me. You've posted eight poems and have only read/commented on three...one asking that person to "review" yours. Geeze. It doesn't make sense to just write and not to read too. |
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Re: Witchcraft
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 1st March 2015 @ 09:18:19 AM AEST
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A brilliant allegory as I've heard. It reminds me of the Daniel Johnson tune, "Devil town". Your is just as impactful. Very well done.
Link to Devil Town, by Daniel Johnson. You'll see what I mean.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RlQh8fnCmCM This is him singing
a capella, but other instrumental versions are there. It is most powerful sung alone.
Mike |
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