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It's a beautiful thing
Contributed by
Kimmy79
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Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 03:13:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Onto hills we played and roamed
they tried to find us and bring us home
We danced in the rain and we loved to sing
you and I were a beautiful thing
We knew places they could never find
and we hid in trees they could never climb
I was the dark and you were the light
and together we were a beautiful sight
My body was your temple to explore
and no one in this world could
have loved you more
we took each other to elevation
and I felt the earth move during penetration
We rolled in the grass and danced on the heather
telling each other we'd always be together
no one could ever extinguish this flame
and two hearts always beat the same
Nothing will change no matter what life will bring
you and I are still a beautiful thing.
A
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Kimmy79
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2015-02-28 15:13:01]
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Re: It's a beautiful thing
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 03:18:04 PM AEST
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This is great, expressive, deep, honest writing. Thank you.
Best,
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Re: It's a beautiful thing
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by code-addresse on
Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 03:18:56 PM AEST
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| It is a great post. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: It's a beautiful thing
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by Waynster on
Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 04:39:18 PM AEST
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Kimmy, this is an awesome write, thanks for sharing!!!
Wayne |
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Re: It's a beautiful thing
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 08:19:27 PM AEST
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| I can feel the pain and, more importantly, the love. Very well written poem |
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Re: It's a beautiful thing
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 10:48:40 PM AEST
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this is perfect!
Peace! |
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Re: It's a beautiful thing
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 2nd March 2015 @ 10:20:31 AM AEST
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Pardon the pun, but this poem is beautiful. Makes me curious why it is listed under 'dark' poetry...Maybe it is not as it seems- a love story between two people. I suppose it could be a clever ode to certain drugs...Or is the topic ironic?
Ooh, I'm curious! Either way; good stuff.
~Scorp |
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Re: It's a beautiful thing
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by thehotshotpoet on
Friday, 6th March 2015 @ 08:01:44 AM AEST
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| very nice read..thanks for sharing |
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