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Success
Contributed by
Beyfoxman5
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Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 03:08:02 PM in AEST
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Success
What is it?
Success
I've got to make it
Success
I have to raise the bar
Success
you can never go too far
Success
So difficult to obtain
Success
And even harder to maintain
Success
How do I know I've made it?
Success
Again, what is it?
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Re: Success
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by Kimmy79 on
Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 03:32:41 PM AEST
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| Look outside the box success can apply to the rich and famous and the pop and movie stars success can apply to the child from a one parent family with little money who made it to university on a shoe string. Define success in as many ways as you can being a decent human being with good social skills is a success I think your poem sums it up beautifully. |
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Re: Success
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by Waynster on
Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 04:36:50 PM AEST
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Is this what they call a blurt poem?
Wayne |
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Re: Success
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 10:58:01 PM AEST
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Tenth grade, topic in high school class, write essay on what success means. Impossible I thought then.
Strive for success, I could not. I was too damn young.
Failure comes and leaves something imprinted upon your mind, if you are lucky. If you're not so lucky, success
is impossible. I mean what would be the whole point
of success otherwise said the animal born to love and be loved.
Peace!
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Re: Success
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 1st March 2015 @ 09:24:25 AM AEST
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Really cool. Getting into e.e. *****s land a bit there. I adore his ability to say "Eff off to your 'rules'....I write from my mind and heart, both in free reign."
I dig the concept...I would find a line to emphasize how hollow it is...that once held, the vessel is empty, and the things that are free are those of substance and wealth.
As said....cool, cool
Invierno PS. Good to read you again...been away for a bit.
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Re: Success
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 10th March 2015 @ 06:34:17 PM AEST
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ambition is personal to each of us: what is all to one is
nothing to another and vice versa,
hugs n' love nessa |
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