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Second Best
Contributed by
xoirishxo
on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Warmth radiates from your sugary brown eyes
Your thoughts pure and true
A tilted smile upon your sweet lips
As you speak of the love you once knew
Merely grains of sand in the hourglass of life
Changed all that she was and could be
Your heart encased with thoughts of her
Your most cherished memories
You would have married her In the blink of an eye
Would have given her the world
She remains your one true love
Her heart made of legendary gold
I smile softly as you speak of her
As my heart cruelly twists
I hear the pain behind your words
I know your greatest wish...
To have her in your arms again
As she used to be
Loving you in her perfection
For all eternity
Copyright ©
xoirishxo
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2003-05-27 01:05:00]
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Re: Second Best
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by wolfflow on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 03:44:41 PM AEST
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| i felt your turmoil right through this one, you expressed it very well as, but your love for this man also comes through, be careful and take your time and hey, SMILES!! |
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Re: Second Best
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 03:47:01 PM AEST
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This reminds me of something my best friend was just telling me the other day. Sad story. Great poem though! Blessed be,
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Second Best
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 07:50:39 PM AEST
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| this is an excellent poem!! great images and so vivid!! ~hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Second Best
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 10:24:46 AM AEST
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Well Colleen,
I do not know what to say!
If it wasn't for my now teary eyes not being brown this could've been written about me! She does have though!
Excellent!
With love
Dean:-) |
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