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Music And My Soul
Contributed by
waynster
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Friday, 27th February 2015 @ 06:07:19 PM in AEST
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Movement
deep within an iconic sphere
Silence is an illusion
so much is happening there
Blood pumping rhythm
causing you to have a semi chaotic mind
Starting to feel comatose
in another world so blind
Your arms and hands reach out
as if to praise the awesome sound
Somewhere within that iconic sphere
you know you will find mutual ground
Your body starts jerking
eyes rolling in your head
No need for any drugs
on the wings of the music is where you tread
Melody like no other
profoundly attractive to your heart and soul
The movement found so deep
allows you to dance with rhythmic control
There is an illusion
but silence is not its name
The world this music brought you to
you will never again be the same
Releasing all energy
molecules of water pierce the walls around
The spirit within you is dancing
and nobody here’s that sound
Your heart is beating
but the music pumps the blood in you
It’s a totally different world
but one your soul begs you to pursue
Written on 28 February 2015
Copyright © 2015 E. Wayne Searles All Rights Reserved
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Re: Music And My Soul
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by xHeathenx on
Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 03:58:20 AM AEST
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Oooh... There's definitely something happening here, and I don't know what it is, but I'm going to get to the bottom of this!
This seems to have to be abstract. The first stanza alone makes me wonder what an iconic sphere is? Heart(though it's not a sphere.)? Head? Eye(Third eye?)?
A movement can relate to music, and a sphere can relate to a speaker in a radio/stereo...
Hmm... There's so much to ponder here.
I like how it's got me thinking, and your poems always have a terrific flow to them. I get carried away with trying to fit details in my poems, so sometimes I mess that part up. Haha.
It's quite a good read.
Good share. :)
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Re: Music And My Soul
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 06:47:31 AM AEST
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Mark said it best.
Another fine read indeed! |
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Re: Music And My Soul
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by Invierno on
Wednesday, 27th April 2016 @ 08:24:22 AM AEST
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Wonderful piece of word art. Sorry I missed it on initial post.
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Re: Music And My Soul
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th September 2020 @ 10:26:22 AM AEST
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