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I want to be free
Contributed by
thepoet353897
on
Friday, 27th February 2015 @ 09:45:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I want to be free from all your hate
Served in my infested, stagnant lake
A mindset of insanity
All I want is to be free
I want to be free from all this death
The saying goodbyes, the last of breaths
Wake up one morning, a happy me
All I want is to be free
I want to be free so please stand back
It matters not of white nor black
So go away, leave me be
All I want is to be free...
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2015-02-27 09:45:53]
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Re: I want to be free
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by alicewhite on
Friday, 27th February 2015 @ 08:28:50 PM AEST
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Love what you say here. Great writing.
Our lakes upon which we all float sink or swim are a spiritual manifestation of our reflected inner souls intentions and our subconscious will
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Re: I want to be free
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by Waynster on
Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 09:12:31 AM AEST
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Excellent write! The feeling here can be felt as expressed. Being able to grasp feeling within other peoples thoughts takes talent my friend, keep it up!!!
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Re: I want to be free
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by thehotshotpoet on
Friday, 6th March 2015 @ 08:07:19 AM AEST
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| a well written peice...thanks for sharing |
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