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Hereafter
Contributed by
lonelywolf04
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Thursday, 26th February 2015 @ 01:16:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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When darkness is the only light I see,
May the Shadows come and live with me,
May I keep warm by the flames of shade,
And feed the hunger that will never fade,
May I sleep in sheets of horror,
Until the days of hereafter,
And be awake to the darkness,
As the light bares witness,
To the evil that has awoke,
Without a word ever spoke.
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lonelywolf04
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2015-02-26 01:16:39] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Hereafter
(User Rating: 1 ) by Waynster on
Thursday, 26th February 2015 @ 06:30:46 AM AEST (User
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This version is much better, it flows and gives us readers a visual of what picture your thoughts have painted! Keep up the good work!
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Re: Hereafter
(User Rating: 1 ) by thehotshotpoet on
Friday, 6th March 2015 @ 08:14:47 AM AEST (User
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a good remake thanks for sharing |
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