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My Friend Sadness

Contributed by tkmcnamara on Tuesday, 24th February 2015 @ 11:35:49 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Hello sadness
You've come back again,
Your eyes look more sunken in
Than usual.
Come in and take off your coat
Make yourself at home in my head
I'll get you some coffee,
I know you like it black.
I've even set up a bed
So stay as long as you'd like
We both know
How you love to run my life.

Goodbye sadness
Thank you for your visit
I appreciated all the thoughts you have given
A weak girl building up the strength
Finally able to grab a handful
To swallow each and every one.

There's no need to stay longer sadness,
You're deed here is done
Your bed is gone and the coffee is cold
My head is not your home anymore,
It belongs to the cobwebs and maggots
Who live deep underground
I think you would like it here
It's quite peaceful, not a sound.

So long Sadness.




Copyright © tkmcnamara ... [ 2015-02-24 11:35:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: My Friend Sadness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th February 2015 @ 12:26:03 AM AEST
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I don't usually comment on suicide poetry. Makes me too sad and I don't really know what to say. But this...wow, deep and dark. I like the metaphor.

Hoping it's all coming from a fictional place.

 photo 1036153111_gif.gifto YPDC.

Tim





Re: My Friend Sadness (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Wednesday, 25th February 2015 @ 06:42:39 AM AEST
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I'm with Timotheus
If its all true- remember tomorrow is another day.
Even sadness needs a day off.
May your days be brighter.




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