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YOUR MY JOY
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richard_campbell
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Tuesday, 24th February 2015 @ 05:29:22 AM in AEST
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(2)Your my Healer
your my Lord
your my Savior, for evermore.
your my King
your my God
your my Deliverer, for evermore
your my Healer
i declared it
your my Lord
i declared it
your my Savior
i declared it, for evermore.
Your my joy
i declared it
your my peace
i declared it
your my King,
in whom am free.
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Re: YOUR MY JOY
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th February 2015 @ 06:02:45 AM AEST
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Re: YOUR MY JOY
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 24th February 2015 @ 12:56:03 PM AEST
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Besides the misspelling your song has merit in more ways than one. I could put music to this.
"I mess up everyday
I often forget to pray
I'm always going astray
but still you are the one"
Quote from 'What a Difference' By Archie Brown |
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Re: YOUR MY JOY
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by Waynster on
Wednesday, 25th February 2015 @ 08:59:15 AM AEST
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Good write, just check your spelling, or you're going to confuse some people. Obviously you used the word your in the wrong way, but only take this as corrective criticism please. I think you have the talent to write though. Also, everyone makes mistakes, we just practice and become more proficient in what we write.
Wayne |
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