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He's my obsession
Contributed by
Kimmy79
on
Saturday, 21st February 2015 @ 03:10:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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He's an obsession
He's my invisible pain
He enters every fibre of my veins
My lips open out like wings
If only I could touch his
naked skin
Obsession can be dark and intense
It can overpower your common sense
If only fantasies could be real
I can only look but never feel
I want more that can be given
in reality
And my obsession will
lead to my tragedy.
S
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Kimmy79
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2015-02-21 15:10:11]
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Re: He's my obsession
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2015 @ 07:28:15 PM AEST
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like this thought process... good stuff!
Well done!
Peace! |
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Re: He's my obsession
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd February 2015 @ 08:10:14 AM AEST
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It can definitely over power your common sense!!!
Nicely done.
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Re: He's my obsession
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 22nd February 2015 @ 09:21:34 AM AEST
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I really dig it.
Free flow from the mind and soul.
I have been there to only find it was not as great in reality as my mind told me it would be.
Some things are best left untouched-realized. .
Splendid! |
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Re: He's my obsession
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 23rd February 2015 @ 11:25:22 PM AEST
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"I want more than can be given"
Loved that line,
good stuff. |
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Re: He's my obsession
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by thepoet353897 on
Friday, 27th February 2015 @ 05:25:32 AM AEST
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this is my new obsession really well done
P.S please review some of mine :) |
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Re: He's my obsession
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 31st August 2020 @ 10:45:52 PM AEST
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| I still like this... |
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