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Dungeon Master
Contributed by
Kimmy79
on
Saturday, 21st February 2015 @ 08:59:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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So now we know where it begins
As he asserted his form of discipline
The girls come with stories
Of shock and awe
Of what went on behind
Those dungeon doors
He takes his desire
to another level
And he is a saucy little devil
So now we are hearing
their own admission
How he seduced them
Into total submission
Their skin came up
In painful welts
Everytime he whipped them
With his belt
Tying them up gave him
a rush of blood
And feeling pain never
felt so good
He liked it easy he liked it rough
He liked them in golden handcuffs
Sometimes the punishments
made them bleed
As he pushed the boundaries
to satisfy his needs
He liked to have it all
his way
Like the sinister character
Dorian Gray
The dungeon was his
playground for fantasies
and those naughty girls
ended up over his knee.
A
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2015-02-21 08:59:45]
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Re: Dungeon Master
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2015 @ 12:22:26 PM AEST
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| Never been into all that, but this is well written and feeds the craving. Old Dorian was a debauched character, and as a lover of Wilde....I'm with you! |
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Re: Dungeon Master
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2015 @ 10:01:39 PM AEST
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interesting write, don't know if it's from fifty shades, didn't read the book. Vile dominance cloaked and riddled with
lack of feeling anything like empathy, or the ego gone mad
making fools of us all.
I too think that it's very well written. Maybe it would make a great silent flick/ with your poem rolling down the screen
in the prologue.
Peace! |
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Re: Dungeon Master
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 23rd February 2015 @ 11:30:58 PM AEST
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Dark and deep
I love it.... |
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