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A Speck Of Sand
Contributed by
JamesStockdale
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Friday, 20th February 2015 @ 11:52:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Just a speck of sand
That's all I am
Miles and miles to roam
Nowhere to call my home
Softly tumbling
Through the sky
With ebb and flow
To a world unknown
Just a speck of sand
Wind blown amongst the land
Final destination still unknown
On my way
Far from home
To a greener place
The promise land
A future yet realized
A timeless span
In God's hand
I shall remain
A speck of sand
Is all I am
Copyright ©
JamesStockdale
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2015-02-20 23:52:21]
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Re: A Speck Of Sand
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by alicewhite on
Saturday, 21st February 2015 @ 12:43:24 AM AEST
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and a mighty sand castle you have created here, a speck of sand is all it takes,, really liked this poem, x I shall be reading more of your work,keep it up
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Re: A Speck Of Sand
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Saturday, 21st February 2015 @ 02:22:11 PM AEST
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Eloquent and humbling. Great stuff.
Best,
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Re: A Speck Of Sand
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd February 2015 @ 02:01:00 AM AEST
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oh what a speck of sand
you are
I think I'll set you aside
to one day roam into a passing
cloud and fall in a snowstorm
In San Francisco
Great Poem!
Peace!
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Re: A Speck Of Sand
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by Kimmy79 on
Sunday, 22nd February 2015 @ 06:50:45 AM AEST
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| From the earth we return we are only passing through. 😊 |
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Re: A Speck Of Sand
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd February 2015 @ 11:46:43 AM AEST
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| In the vastness of the universe, I guess that we are all just specks of wind-blown sand, destination unknown. But without a speck of sand, there would be no Sahara. So all specks are important. May you come to rest in your promised land. A fine job, got me thinking. |
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Re: A Speck Of Sand
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by shelby on
Monday, 23rd February 2015 @ 11:55:11 PM AEST
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Beautiful.flowing and humble.I love it
Michelle |
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Re: A Speck Of Sand
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by kmec1990 on
Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 05:53:06 AM AEST
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Beautiful and inspirational, I'm still looking for the bubblegum,.
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Re: A Speck Of Sand
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd March 2015 @ 07:33:28 AM AEST
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To me this was how insignificant we are in the vast universe.
Even if I got it wrong, it's so beautifully written and has definitely got that flow thing going on!
Nicely done.
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Re: A Speck Of Sand
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd March 2015 @ 10:09:19 AM AEST
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It's like I can get different meanings out of this but still in the vastness of it all, no matter how important we are to ourselves, we truly are one dot in the universe.
I can feel the emotion in this.
Another note, Miles and miles to roam
Nowhere to call my home
That reaches out and slaps me. I can really relate because back in 2012, I was actually homeless for a while.
Keepa writin'!
Tim |
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