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Lorelei
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Wednesday, 18th February 2015 @ 04:56:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I was beckoned by a siren
Sweet Lorelei's song
My vessel was shattered
But my sense of self still strong
I stood on my island
Upset but not distraught
The challenges that lie forth
Must be faced, not thrown at me for naught
For even in the face of defeat,
My burning will carried on
It seems along with hope
My pride is all but gone
I may not be, brimming with integrity
But it's carried, by your continued support of me
I learn of my self-worth, what I have inside
And thank Lorelei, for the courage to have tried
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xHeathenx
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Re: Lorelei
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by alicewhite on
Friday, 20th February 2015 @ 12:28:23 PM AEST
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| Ever more haunting , this leaves me breathless and endlessly longing, soooooo beautiful and bitter sweet , i can taste the acid that your words leave dripping on my tongue, and the pain is poignant and delicious. xxx |
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Re: Lorelei
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd February 2015 @ 12:37:21 AM AEST
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Lorelie is such a beautiful name
past that a friend all the same
Just the right amount of integrity
is all one could ever hope for
in the end.
this is very nice, a lot of folks need these gentle
words.
Well done!
Peace! |
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Re: Lorelei
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 22nd February 2015 @ 10:50:37 AM AEST
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Beautifully written. Good job here.
~Scorp |
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