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Enlightenment
Contributed by
spiritbody
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Sunday, 15th February 2015 @ 04:41:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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With the gentle ascention of the smoke from the incense
My body did rise from its unskilful actions
And looked down upon the suffering they had born
And wept for them with the grace of a Buddha
With the purfumed air of the spiritual life
My speech did fall silent
Yet spoke a million words of truth
Only known to that of a Buddha
With the clearing of the smoke
My mind did disolve its clouds
And clarity shone brightly
Illuminating what had been dark
To show that all was one
And always had been one.
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2015-02-15 04:41:00]
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Re: Enlightenment
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by Waynster on
Sunday, 15th February 2015 @ 09:11:19 AM AEST
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Hello, this is different, but I liked it, thanks for sharing
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Re: Enlightenment
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 15th February 2015 @ 10:54:30 AM AEST
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Very cool! I love the use of the stilting effect to convey a sense of a 'revealing' of some import.
Very well done, and I agree with your content.
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