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Thank you my friend
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Monday, 9th February 2015 @ 12:41:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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I wish to thank you friend
But not "you" in the sense
Of any individual
No, for that is not what you are
You yourself are massive
But your inner-self is small
Like a complex organism
With a vast expanse of cells
To you, I owe a number
Of near-endless thanks
For the ways you've touched me
And for all my highs and lows
For the scrunching of my smile
And the wiggling of my toes
For the shaping of who I am
And who to become
For all the places in which we've been
And in all of those to come
Your kind words and inspirations
To exceed my limitations
The resolutions of your efforts
Won't soon come to end
For I cannot forget you,
For you are everyone, my friend
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Re: Thank you my friend
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th February 2015 @ 01:17:45 AM AEST
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Your inspiration is very fortunate for us... everyone here. Niiiiiice!
In answer to your author's note about seeing poetry out of the corner of your eye as parody, nope.
Thank you for another enjoyable read.
Tim |
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Re: Thank you my friend
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by Invierno on
Monday, 9th February 2015 @ 07:48:28 AM AEST
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As Tim said, another wonderful poem. I enjoyed reading this, and will keep on the look out for you, Heathen.
Best,
Invierno |
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Re: Thank you my friend
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 9th February 2015 @ 08:14:00 AM AEST
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| This made me smile. Such a beautiful and kind read. Quite soulful, I would say. :) |
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Re: Thank you my friend
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by softerware on
Tuesday, 1st March 2016 @ 11:05:55 PM AEST
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Not in keeping with your observational perspective; but such a delightful departure! This embraces that which is life to most of us, affection and friendship.
I knew an analytical writer that found his kindness and warmth at midlife. He quit his job and became a writer!
You are flirting with some major changes here! I like the dimension it gives your writing. Perhaps you should encourage this visiting muse.
softerware
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